This is a story that I wrote for a school assignment in vocabulary. I think that it's a good story, but I'd like to hear what you think about it. Anyway, I used my imagination to best of my ability and here is what I came up with:
“THE ALUMINUM ATHLETE” 05-14-08
There was once a brand new package of aluminum foil. This was the best seller in the entire super market! Ever since they had this foil in stock it had been the best product ever used. Once an athlete was getting ready for the big race one Saturday morning. He had to pack a lunch that day so that he could store up on as much energy as possible. This would also come in handy for lunch. So he jogged down to the super market for something to keep the food fresh, after all, it was suppose to be very hot that day. So he bought himself a blanket for a picnic after the race. Then he went in the cafeteria isle and got himself one Ziploc for the sandwich and another for the water. However he had seen the aluminum foil and decided that it would also keep the water cool. What he didn’t know was that there was a secret to making it work. This secret was the key to the success of the products’ fame. So everything was rung up and bought, then he jogged home. The next morning, he went out for his daily jog when his phone rang and he agreed to go get some salmon for his mom. Unfortunately, to his surprise he had to get directory to the sea food restaurant because the carburetor to his car wasn’t working. So he jogged to where the map said to go. Besides, the cement from the re-paving was still wet. So he made the delivery to his mom. Soon, the aluminum foil was feeling deserted and it was getting very wrinkled and cracked. It was so use to feeling infinite at the super market. It wanted to inquire to the jogger “why he had abandoned him?” Soon later, it started getting angry and large. The chimney was lit! Next the foil was lit, and the house was on fire! All the food, gasoline, and cleaning products got lit with the curtains and beds. The last thing that happened was the house practically blew up! But the fire department got there first. The janitor was there trying to figure out how the fire started but was not successful. All knives were as hot as the stove and were not suitable for using anymore. Soon the last bit of the foil started to maximize enough to attach all around the knives and was turned to something even stronger! The profit for the foil was over. An operation took place during the time when the jogger was in the race. The doctors found out that the foil was from mercury and that was what made it so successful! It was because it could maximize from having some of the planet inside of its material! That was the source to its success the secret to making it work was to leave it in the fire place for about an hour while no one was home. It was an example of a varying species. Soon there was zero left. Through the prize money and having one knife with the foil on it left. But having the foil tame, the jogger was able to pay for a brand new house and keep winning money from the competitions.
“The End”
